Unchee diwaree, galiya he tang.
Mere sapno ko ab milegi umang
Ab rokne se na rukoongi me
Ab apne sapno ko roshan karugi me
Azadi se ab jeena he mujhe
Raaste he mushkil par himmat he sang
Har kadam pe hosle he buland
Ab darane se na darugi me
Ab dabane se na dabugi me
Azadii se ab jeena he mujhe
Andhera mita ke roshan kiya
Bekhuof azaad he rehna mujhe
Bekhouf azaad he behna mujhe
Bekhuof azaad he jeena mujhe. …..
Unchee diwaree todugi me
Apne raaste modugi me
Apne sapno ko uncha pohochaugi me
Apne Zid or Azadii se rechaugi itihaas me
Raasto ko banaugi asaan me
Apne himmat se badhugi me
Kadmo ko dhat ke rakhugi me
Apni manzil dhoondoogi me
Ab azaadi se rahugi me
Ab azaadi se chalugi me
Ab azaadi se bahugi me
Ab azaadi se udugi me
Ab azaadi se jeeungi me…..
ROSHNI BORANA
boranaroshni 
Nice! Freedom is the need of life ! And I appreciate this so want to share some thoughts, “Sleeping is the only time to feel real freedom, because there is
no rules in dreaming”.
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Thank you,and what u said is also true we have full freedom to dream and dream and no one can dare to stop
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What does it mean to be a brave girl according to u?
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Wow…
Best stanza
“Ab azaadi se rahugi me
Ab azaadi se chalugi me
Ab azaadi se bahugi me
Ab azaadi se udugi me
Ab azaadi se jeeungi me”
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Thank you for reading so carefully
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Welcome.
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What does it mean to be a brave girl according to u?
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What does it mean to be a brave girl according to me? Ummmmm🤔
Well, it’s very difficult to be a “BRAVE GIRL” in today’s world. If you can take stand for right thing then you are brave. But it’s not easy. My younger sister always takes stand for what’s right, but I always get afraid when she does so. For the obvious reason, anyone can harm her when I’m not around.
So, for me a “BRAVE GIRL” is the one who takes stand for what’s right but after putting the consequences in mind, because girls are smarter than boys😉.
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Absolutely! !!☺
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So you agree with all the things I said?
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Ya ,of course
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Do you have a brother?
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Ya,younger to me
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Oo.. Then he wouldn’t have put any restrictions on you, like don’t go alone, don’t fight with boys, try come home early etc.
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Naa
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Well if he will, try not fighting back because that’s the way we brothers care for our sisters. We just don’t show it directly. Maybe because we don’t want to show that we have a soft corner in our heart.
And one more thing…..
When ever he’ll say these things, just give him a tight hug. It’ll make him feel good…..
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Sure
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☺
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Amazing poem! Read a few on this blog and thoroughly enjoyed reading them, keep writing 🙂
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Thank you so much !!! ☺
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